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I really enjoyed this one. Truly horrible ending (in a good way, you know what I mean)

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I've been enjoying your work. This is a thought-provoking piece. One shouldn't fool around with life too recklessly; eventually, it expires. I think it's okay to spread out your stories so you get proper rest and plan out your longer-form writing.

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Thanks, I'm pleased you like it! Although I didn't particularly touch on it here, one thing I find interesting about immortality is the memory side of things... There's an interesting solo RPG called Thousand Year Old Vampire which touches on how memories are lost when someone lives unnaturally long.

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That is true! Even in a short life, memory can be failing. I never heard of that, but it sounds awesome!

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