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This is so nicely structured and set up. I found it really involving. I rather wish XR has mind melding powers, but I guess outreach has to be done the old-fashioned way ;)

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This is fantastic! Cosmic superpower origins. I could really see this as a prologue for a book.

Although Extras made me think of Ed and Elric.

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It reminded me of the origin stories of Freedom Force and DC Online!

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